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Take me away




Strophe

I used to be a believer
I loved God and Jesus
I prayed every night
Hoping for an answer
I was hoping to see You
Father, I couldn’t wait
I wore a golden cross ‘round my neck
So you would be close to my heart
That I would be there for you,
If you would come.


Bridge one

But then it all went wrong
Everything was gone
Everybody was against me
You have left me
I hated You, I cursed You
Wished You were gone
And now I regret that,
So can You please…

Can You please…


Chorus

Take me away!
(I have sinned, but now I see that I was wrong)
Can You forgive me!
(I cry every night, hoping it was not real)
So Father,…
Can You take me away?


Strophe

There was a time
That I had no worries
No problems to think about
Cuz I knew,
Up there was You
Keeping an eye on me
I went to church
Just to see Your son
I prayed to him too
I was looking foward,
To see You two


Bridge one

But then it all went wrong
Everything was gone
Everybody was against me
You have left me
I hated You, I cursed You
Wished You were gone
And now I regret that,
So can You please…

Can You please…


Chorus

Take me away!
(I have sinned, but now I see that I was wrong)
Can You forgive me!
(I cry every night, hoping it was not real)
So Father,…
Can You take me away?


Solo



Bridge two

It was wrong
To do not believe in You
To hate You, to curse You
Oh God what have I done?
I never forgive myself
I never will!
Now I hate myself
My faith in myself has gone
But You are the only,
The only one
Who can heal this wounds
So could You, would You,

Could You, would You, (X3)



Chorus

Take me away!
(I have sinned, but now I see that I was wrong)
Can you forgive me!
(I cry every night, hoping it was not real)
So Father,…
Can you take me away?
(X2)




Lyric  written by Michael Sanchez
Song ©  Mem:\Link

©2004-2010 ~Mike4ever
:iconmike4ever:

Author's Comments

A new lyric! If you read my journal, you know about it. I gonna make a drawing for this later on.
This came from myself, with personal experience. So this song is about my life.

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:iconguyaricankitten:
........ I'm speechless.. it's an absolutely beautiful song... I would love to hear it sung someday.. it's just... wow... I like this very much...

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And even though I've been so lonely, like I have never been before, You never said it would be easy, but You said You'd see me through the storm - "He Will Carry Me" Mark Schultz
:iconkappa-oie:
Oh wow!!! I love this!!!!! THis is a great song esp. about religion... this is just too awesome!!! I had no Idea!!!! K.. I'm gonna hug you!!:hug: Again... this is awesome, I love the chorus... its so nicely written!!!

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:evillaugh:--->:fart: :burp: :slyfart:<---:evillaugh:
:iconmike4ever:
:jawdrop: You like it? Well, :giggle: I already knew that you were going to like it. Franky told my that you are very into religion. I think that that song is my best! Thanx Kappa! :hug: :giggle:

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+Torture garden rules of thumb apply+
+To sacred flesh and the naked eye+
+Golgothic this erotica+
+Stinking of honey and worse, sulphur+
:iconmike4ever:
I'm know busy on finding the right chords. It's going to be an acoustic song, with a little heavier chorus.
Thanx for the fav! :hug:

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+Torture garden rules of thumb apply+
+To sacred flesh and the naked eye+
+Golgothic this erotica+
+Stinking of honey and worse, sulphur+
:iconkappa-oie:
Yeah.... I luff it!!! Its just awesome!!! :hug:!!!! :highfive:

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:evillaugh:--->:fart: :burp: :slyfart:<---:evillaugh:
:iconlisafeary:
is speechless too....its a beautiful song, i had a nice peaceful time reading this :hug:
:iconmike4ever:
Thanx! :hug: I'm planning on doing such lyric again.

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+Torture garden rules of thumb apply+
+To sacred flesh and the naked eye+
+Golgothic this erotica+
+Stinking of honey and worse, sulphur+
:iconmike4ever:
:spotlight-left: :bow: :spotlight-right: Thanx! :hug:

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+Torture garden rules of thumb apply+
+To sacred flesh and the naked eye+
+Golgothic this erotica+
+Stinking of honey and worse, sulphur+
:iconkappa-oie:
YW!!! :hug::hug:

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:evillaugh:--->:fart: :burp: :slyfart:<---:evillaugh:
:iconstargal:
Holy cow!!!! Steve!! That's one of the best songs I've seen for a long time!! That just completly blew me away... wow... :hug:

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